tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post412831831175669724..comments2023-07-29T01:35:06.282+09:30Comments on And Cinderella lost her shoe: Me, a Perfectionist? I Think Not. (And Yet...)Toivoa ja Elämänhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10938648865926536457noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-76078429634561368232009-04-12T19:25:00.000+09:302009-04-12T19:25:00.000+09:30whoa, there was like, a huge delay between your la...whoa, there was like, a huge delay between your last comments and this one Kate, what the hell :S<BR/>and, /bows<BR/>thank you ;D<BR/>ly xxToivoa ja Elämänhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10938648865926536457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-59254777582024499162009-04-12T19:18:00.000+09:302009-04-12T19:18:00.000+09:30you know i think you are and amazing writerso shut...you know i think you are and amazing writer<BR/>so shut up! lol<BR/>i love you xxKatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11688979798041621657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-12603775348345549902009-04-10T12:49:00.000+09:302009-04-10T12:49:00.000+09:30Rasberry Hatter - I'm guessing / hoping you mean t...Rasberry Hatter - I'm guessing / hoping you mean that in a good way ;P<BR/>thanks for the comment! <BR/><BR/>Riot Kidd - :) thankss. I love that you can relate. I mean, not that it's a good thing, but that my writing is identifiable with. Your writing is pretty good too, for my first glance at it, it's heartfelt and yeah (:<BR/>Thanks for keeping reading<BR/><BR/>JoJO - Lol yeah. (:Toivoa ja Elämänhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10938648865926536457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-83017829734331142192009-04-10T04:45:00.000+09:302009-04-10T04:45:00.000+09:30I know exactly what you mean.. I'm a perfectionist...I know exactly what you mean.. I'm a perfectionist.. I know it. Not to the point of obsession but I like everything I do to be done.. "well" haha!<BR/><BR/>I get it :)Jojo a.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14093124420511429086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-60362544616552154752009-04-10T01:35:00.000+09:302009-04-10T01:35:00.000+09:30I'm gonna tell you this. You DO write amazingl...I'm gonna tell you this. You DO write amazingly. I read this post threw twice. What grabbed me was how much I can relate. How every line you wrote- was more or less just how I feel. How I've felt for the past 4 years.<BR/>I'm the same. I guess I could do brilliantly at school; but I never actually do what I say I'm going to. You most definitely do have an amazing talent. I feel like this- but could I ever put it into words like you? Could I ever write a long post like this? No way. <BR/>Keep writing. I'm going to keep reading.<BR/>& you're not good at writing- you're great.elliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059728581588593222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-68001368125883492422009-04-09T21:42:00.000+09:302009-04-09T21:42:00.000+09:30I think your blog posts are rather extraordinary. ...I think your blog posts are rather extraordinary. So there's that...<BR/><BR/>- RaspberryHatter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-60780145445105953852009-04-09T21:37:00.000+09:302009-04-09T21:37:00.000+09:30Sweeeeeeeeeeeet. ;Plol yeah iunno, i just get like...Sweeeeeeeeeeeet. ;P<BR/>lol yeah iunno, i just get like that sometimes yoToivoa ja Elämänhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10938648865926536457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-25796194177898353632009-04-09T21:31:00.000+09:302009-04-09T21:31:00.000+09:30Yeah, I can pick up the rhythmn. So it just comes ...Yeah, I can pick up the rhythmn. So it just comes out like that? Sweet. I always thought there was some method I just hadnt heard of or something haha. /is dumbass.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-38191920612435972882009-04-09T21:13:00.000+09:302009-04-09T21:13:00.000+09:30I dunno, I just got into a rhythm and it happened ...I dunno, I just got into a rhythm and it happened to work like that, so the lines needed pauses there<BR/>You know how our wonderful [/sarcasm] English teacher reads those poems without pausing, "Reading in sense groups"?<BR/>well, no, do not do that, the pauses make it work to some rhythm in my mind >.<<BR/>take that out and it ruins it.<BR/>i just started the rhythm a little earlier with some editing just then, idk if you can pick it?<BR/>it works in my head.Toivoa ja Elämänhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10938648865926536457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1850468548782247769.post-51007899040198182612009-04-09T20:45:00.000+09:302009-04-09T20:45:00.000+09:30dude that last part, in particular, is fucking ama...dude that last part, in particular, is fucking amazing.<BR/>random question, you know how you write like:<BR/><BR/>"pressure moving outward, upward; threatening to snap<BR/>bones like twigs, Crack. Crack.<BR/>Heart beating? no,"<BR/><BR/>and there are random new lines interspersed between the actual sentence? is that random? cuz poets always do it, and ive never really got it hahaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com